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Red sky above,
As welcome and beautiful as the open arms of a mother.
But beyond the warmth lies terror
Thunderclaps in the heat of the night
Piercing the souls of supermen
Leaving only a pool of scarlet to reminisce them
Yet, no thought goes behind the trigger

Tainted sky,
Why do you awaken me?
My gleeful days are over,
My eyes open,
Only to see the ink stained cotton
Left behind where you lay
And you watch them quarrel pointlessly
Are they not fighting for the same cause?

Forsaken
Blind me now,
Your face no longer intruiges me,
Your eyes reveal the ugly truth
Hidden behind your peaceful demeanor
So no more will I await your awakening
For your beauty lies as far as the surface
But I see more
And that is all I need
©2008-2009 ~Timburton9965
:icontimburton9965:

Author's Comments

well, this is an attempt at poetry. comments appreciated ;]

UPDATE:

i made it better, as soon as i realized its flaws :)

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Beautiful!

" And you watch them quarrel pointlessly
Are they not fighting for the same cause? "

I loved that part! :heart:

--
ianto; coffee boy.

"I've got a secret weapon. Chocolate. Preferably dark." <3

"I love you." "..don't."

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